Critique #1 spring2010

so my crit basically went like this.....

• more "pop" than elizabeth murray
• gray panels fuctioned as a grid
• panel is compelled to be read as a narrative(gray panels "buildings" succeeded into a void)
• sides of paintings: investigate how the line moves from the piece to foam piece
• Jenna suggested cityscape (organic shapes-> city life)
• Paul suggeasted it referenced a grid
• Joe said the circle is central optical point and seems like a visual vortex. He asked if there could be a balance to it.... something to comtemplate
• Paul wants me to contemplate the lighting source for my pieces. He says the lighting is an important aspect of it. I totally agree.
• the layers of panels come off as interesting and I should investigate the landscape aspect of it when building my piece for thesis.
• group says I should keep focusing on the color theory of my pieces because it seems to be an important aspect.

* I am open to another opinions or suggestions.